Today we are doing "show don’t tell” to write 3-5 effective narrative openings. I will be reflecting on 3 photos that I'm going to "show not tell you". This has to do what image has given, I hope you enjoy it. Here's what I wrote.
1. As I was sitting down on the step while it was frosty, a man walked past me and gave me this side view that didn't surprise me.
2. Is anyone around me? I need to take this luscious meat home tonight for my kids.
3. It was just a common day for me as I felt the feeling of boredom once again.
kia Ora tehya brayden here.
ReplyDeleteI love the short stories they were very funny.
I like the meat one it was funny
next time you could do 1-2 more sentences
kind regards
brayden l:)