W.A.L.T: Write a narrative
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
- The title is suitable for the text.
- The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
- The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
- The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
- Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.
In Ako Ngatahi we had to write a narrative about a video. It was about a boy opening a present that was a dog with three legs. Here is the video of the present. I hope you enjoy my story.
Puppy days
I was just playing on my xbox.
My mum walked in the house and she has a box in her hands. She puts the box on the table and she disrupts my game .
I open the box and a dog comes out,
But wait it has three legs, I chuck it away from me.
It comes back to me I kick it away from me and I say “get lost.”
He spotted a red ball the dog runs to it, he bumped into the cupboard, I laughed in my head. I started to get to know him and I started to know how he felt with three legs. I said to myself well I have one whole leg and I have one half of a leg.he has three whole legs and one half of a leg. I started to feel happy well he does need a friend like him and I need a friend like me. he’s like me and I’m like him . I got my the ball and I got my crutches and shouted to my mum “Mum ,well be outside”. I turned the door handle and the dog opened it more for me and him I threw the ball. He ran to it so fast. I said I want to call him Tomes.
