Writing JUST ME AND MY SHIP (SPACE CHIMP)

WALT: Write a narrative.

I was proud that I finished my space chimp before morning tea at school. It helped me that I sat alone. Next time I will sit beside people who keep me focused.

Just me and my ship

In 1961  I was getting ready to launch...(5..4..3..2..1..blast off)

I was in space all alone just me and my ship.  All asleep and then 65 years latter I woke up and I could see the shining stars.  It was such a beautiful sight for me.  I can’t believe it, I can see the galaxy shining in my eyes.  2 minutes later I saw Earth shining into my eyes.  I started to head to it, and I got closer and closer every time the ship moves it starts to make loud noises like boom, crash, crack, smash!  It sounded so terrible it gave me a headache.  I could feel the air going into my eyes, my eyes started to burn every time they opened.  It felt like I got a hole bunch of dust  thrown into my eyes.  It hurt like hell.  My cheeks blow back,it felt like they were going to come off.  I could hear my heart pounding so fast faster than a cheetah running  to get it’s prey.  I could see the  front of my  ship.  I felt boiling hot.  I felt like my face

and my hands were on fire.  I finally landed,I can see that there are no people no cars nothing but me  my ship and the photo of me and my owner called Bob.  we were All alone in this disgusting planet, I could fell a tear running down my face

It dropped on the ground and I could see it drying the dirt as it dropped on the ground.

I said to myself “This is not a beautiful sight at all”.  The last thing I said was “It’s not a planet its our home.”   

WILL I SURVIVE OR NOT???

DON DON DON!!!!