BABY BUFFALO’S!!!!
Term 2 Week 3
W..A.L.T recall vents through the eyes of an animal.
Success Criteria I know I will be successful when my recount has a
- Title
- Orientation: When? Who? Where? Why?
- Sequence of events: What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell, and feel,
- Personal Comment: How did the events make you feel
I was walking along the river bank in the middle of my Mum and Dad,but suddenly,my Dad stopped for a second and roared like a mighty tiger roaring to the herd, “Run for your life's save yourself!”
As soon as I saw the lions I ran for my life, but then a lion gave a mighty jump and, Bang, the lion caught me in his sharp ferocious claws. I began to fall and I lost my control, then I fell to the ground, rolling into the river. After a while I got struck by a crocodile, It bit me on my thigh, it hurt like hell. I could feel the crocodile’s jaws digging into me.I could feel the crocodile and lions stretching me, fighting over me, I got so scared I didn't know what to do. I felt so scared. The lions won the tug war I felt like they ripped me into little pieces.The lions dragged me out of the water and started to eat me but luky
the herd came to rescue me from the lions, I said to myself, yay my Mum and Dad are back, I was surprised that they would actually come for me. The lions ran like a baby, Once the herd went for another walk this time the Calves had to be in the middle so anything that tries to get us they have to go through the big Buffalos. My Dad is really protective now because of what happened last time. if my Dad see’s me sad or hurt then he will get really angry, but just telling you it happened the next day then the next and the next but all the baby buffalos including me and my friends no matter what happens I will always be safe with the herd.”
What happened last week was a disaster, now I have so many scars and I feel like I have a broken leg right now, because I got pulled, scratched and bitten on my legs and thigh! But that doesn't mean I can or have to give up. I like trying because trying means personal best, And I will not give up!!!.
